I just started a Sherlock/John fic on AO3 that has over a 1000 comments and so far it is keeping my interest but there is something about it that hasn't completely hooked me. There's a sense of glibness to the writing that I want gone - just give me characters and good characterization which she has done, but I can sense the author's presence as well and she should be invisible. I will continue and let you know.
(no subject)
Date: 2013-01-03 08:00 am (UTC)